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Post by ej on Mar 6, 2018 23:11:56 GMT -5
Glade to see Nate catch a break. He could use some happy in his life.
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Post by DavidAMorse1701 on Mar 13, 2018 0:55:28 GMT -5
I loved the last six episodes, there all so emotionally satisfying, and enjoyable episodes. Each story seems to be part of a larger story, a part of the larger universe, but like a miniseries within it as well. Learning to Fall brings Nate and Elliott together which I feel is right. It shows Nate accepting his attraction to Elliott. He's got something in common with Robin in that he always dated girls before. He really seemed to be heading that way. In his recent interactions with Nik he seemed conflicted.
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Post by jnwrx1 on Apr 8, 2018 20:06:31 GMT -5
Excellent story. I like the fact that this mirrored so much of real life relationships where the attraction builds gradually, and people often get to know someone in other ways than WHAM! Instant chemistry. This has the potential to springboard and dovetail with other relationships. I can see Nate and Elliot lasting even better because of the gradual building of the relationship. The friends they have pulling for them aids as well. Loved Nate's comment about Brett's chicken neck! I so wish I was Elliot right now! Nate seems like just about the perfect guy. He's apparently cute and courteous, and he has just enough real experience to make him wise enough to know what he really wants and how to hold on to it. The slowly built up romance is the best kind of story and relationship. I wish I could find it in real life, but these two definitely are my new favorite couple, here!
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Post by drewbie on Apr 13, 2018 17:02:55 GMT -5
I hope Nik finds a bf soon. btw I love all the interactions with Alec and Sasha and Kale and Chase and the others as well, keep up the good work
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Post by DavidAMorse1701 on Jul 8, 2018 22:56:33 GMT -5
I reread the episode and I really love it. Its so beautiful to see Elliott and Nate fall in love. We need to stop over analyzing and learn to just live. People in fiction as in life spend too much time worrying instead of enjoying life. Elliott and Nate both have suffered and they deserve a chance at happiness.
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Post by DavidAMorse1701 on Jan 23, 2019 3:35:17 GMT -5
Such a nice episode, I just read it a third time. Elliot and Nate are good for each other. With Elliot attending the local community college he and Nate can study together. Usually High School and college relationships don't survive because of the distance as much as the age difference. One year or less in age is not insurmountable.
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Post by RndmRunner on Jul 26, 2020 16:38:20 GMT -5
Just finished Learning to Fall. First off, an apology for not previously posting comments here. I regularly comment on Gay Authors when I read your stories but haven't here up till now. That's a shame as i have been selfishly powering through the whole of Sanataria Springs since i found them here in May or June. It's amazing to get them together.
First of all, I am very impressed at how you created the Sanataria Universe and found a simple [?] way for others to contribute and create threads to the story lines and how well the guidelines have been followed. I must admit though that I am biased and i am a particular fan of your stories in the series. This story illustrates how you have developed these characters and nurtured their growth in an entertaining way. The Nate Elliot ship is particularly sweet not in part due to how it has grown slowly and organically. I personally an far too old to be interested in teenage friction fiction and your stories, and this series, are about relationships, romantic and otherwise.
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Post by Dabeagle on Jul 28, 2020 23:25:40 GMT -5
Just finished Learning to Fall. First off, an apology for not previously posting comments here. I regularly comment on Gay Authors when I read your stories but haven't here up till now. That's a shame as i have been selfishly powering through the whole of Sanataria Springs since i found them here in May or June. It's amazing to get them together. First of all, I am very impressed at how you created the Sanataria Universe and found a simple [?] way for others to contribute and create threads to the story lines and how well the guidelines have been followed. I must admit though that I am biased and i am a particular fan of your stories in the series. This story illustrates how you have developed these characters and nurtured their growth in an entertaining way. The Nate Elliot ship is particularly sweet not in part due to how it has grown slowly and organically. I personally an far too old to be interested in teenage friction fiction and your stories, and this series, are about relationships, romantic and otherwise. Welcome to the board, and I'm glad you've found the whole series. They are a lot of fun and I come back to them often for inspiration.
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