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Post by Neal on Oct 27, 2021 3:45:01 GMT -5
Nice story. Interesting format. I liked it.
Best sentence, "Take every chance to do good."
Thank you Dave
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Post by PaulR5 on Oct 27, 2021 12:36:54 GMT -5
I have to agree with Neal. A good story, fascinating format.
So when is the sequel coming out, featuring events and some follow-up from the viewpoint of Riley texting Sean and Ash?
The story reminded me of picture of a tee shirt I saw on a Facebook ad which says: "I'm Not Gay, But My Boyfriend Is."
Dave, you are so getting quoted from this story.
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Post by Lugnutz on Oct 27, 2021 13:53:43 GMT -5
Sounds like something worn on The Fosters.  |
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Post by Dabeagle on Oct 28, 2021 0:16:46 GMT -5
I'm glad you've enjoyed it! The format is a twist on the 'pen pal' style that has worked well for other stories I've read - I'll look for the names in the morning.
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Post by padrepower on Oct 28, 2021 23:13:28 GMT -5
Loved the story was totally consistent with Sean's character. Maybe in some future story Bryce and Riley can hang with Sean and Ash maybe throw in Boomer and Garrett And OMG that picture you had that accompanied the story your getting better then Comicality in coming up with pictures
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Post by Dabeagle on Nov 1, 2021 7:25:05 GMT -5
I didn't think Comicality used images for his stories, but then it's been a while since I've read his stuff.
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Post by Steve T. on Nov 1, 2021 14:08:50 GMT -5
Yeah. I liked the format too.
I can understand that Bryce knew who Sean was and his situation with girls and then Asher. SS is a small town and I assume most people know "of" others at least, even if they aren't friends. What I didn't know was how Bryce knew Sean's cell number to text him. I admit, maybe teens are more apt to put that information out there, on Snap or Insta. Just curious how he knew his number.
Looking forward to a sequel!
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Post by Dabeagle on Nov 1, 2021 20:30:05 GMT -5
Yeah, I didn't explain how he got contact information. I admit that's sometimes a mystery to me. My kids tell me about people messaging them over one thing or another out of the blue, so I don't know. It was a deliberate thing to not mention if it was a phone number or other service.
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Post by Dabeagle on Nov 1, 2021 20:31:03 GMT -5
On a side note, I thought the person posting as Padre Power was someone I knew - or another someone I knew - and I had sent him where the image was from and all that. Was kind of funny when we both figured out what the heck we were talking about!
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Post by PaulR5 on Nov 2, 2021 0:32:56 GMT -5
Yeah. I liked the format too. I can understand that Bryce knew who Sean was and his situation with girls and then Asher. SS is a small town and I assume most people know "of" others at least, even if they aren't friends. What I didn't know was how Bryce knew Sean's cell number to text him. I admit, maybe teens are more apt to put that information out there, on Snap or Insta. Just curious how he knew his number. Looking forward to a sequel! There are all sorts of companies which allow you, for a small fee, to find out phone numbers (often, but not always, unlisted and cell numbers as well as regular and posted numbers). Some are as low as $9.95 a month for up to 30 numbers or more. and often, persons can be persuaded to give you someone's number without asking if you have a good reason. |
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