Post by PaulR5 on Feb 28, 2016 23:41:29 GMT -5
I can't believe no one has commented on "Crumbling Castles" yet! Cynus, great job, and the timelines are beginning to come together.
Thank you for featuring Kristin and Maggie more in this story. Thank you for Damon's comment that got Seth mad. Sometimes, the best intentions can go awry because of statements to someone else where we don't have all the facts about something. Yet, there are times when we have to try, even with incomplete facts. Damon meant well, even though it was like rubbing cayenne pepper in Seth's wounds. Sometimes, however, meaning well and insensitivity can combine, as in this case.
What wisdom from the sandbox! Way to go, Foster. And it was good to see Kristen and Maggie and Mr Bianchi taking the lead. How about a story featuring Mr. Bianchi more? Samuel, is there a Mrs. Bianchi? A former Mrs. Bianchi? A late Mrs. Bianchi? A future Mrs. Bianchi? Will we ever meet Kristin's parents in a story?
And since this is (very roughly) two months after Royce was first arrested, will we get any verbal interaction between Royce and Seth and Foster in one or two future stories?
Since Seth and Logan like musicals, do they also like attending concerts by the school show band, Sahara?
Way to go, Samuel. Looking forward to more stories.
Thank you for featuring Kristin and Maggie more in this story. Thank you for Damon's comment that got Seth mad. Sometimes, the best intentions can go awry because of statements to someone else where we don't have all the facts about something. Yet, there are times when we have to try, even with incomplete facts. Damon meant well, even though it was like rubbing cayenne pepper in Seth's wounds. Sometimes, however, meaning well and insensitivity can combine, as in this case.
What wisdom from the sandbox! Way to go, Foster. And it was good to see Kristen and Maggie and Mr Bianchi taking the lead. How about a story featuring Mr. Bianchi more? Samuel, is there a Mrs. Bianchi? A former Mrs. Bianchi? A late Mrs. Bianchi? A future Mrs. Bianchi? Will we ever meet Kristin's parents in a story?
And since this is (very roughly) two months after Royce was first arrested, will we get any verbal interaction between Royce and Seth and Foster in one or two future stories?
Since Seth and Logan like musicals, do they also like attending concerts by the school show band, Sahara?
Way to go, Samuel. Looking forward to more stories.
