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Post by Dr. Wilson on Sept 29, 2016 14:25:34 GMT -5
I've been following the Sanitaria Springs saga for at least a year and a half without commenting, mostly because I have a hard time coming up with anything deeper than "Great story. Keep it up!" So for whatever it's worth, consider this another endorsement. Interesting characters in interesting situations. Oh, and if you want to fix such things, there's a typo about 80% of the way through the story: "When Id' first met him, coming out of the pool ...". (That sort of pickiness served me well when I was a computer programmer; mostly just annoying now that I'm retired.) Trust me, we writers appreciate those lines, too. Please, don't worry about depth in comments (this is addressed to anyone reading) just let us know you're reading it and liking it! That, at the least, opens up a dialogue, and that's what we crave more than anything. I long to interact with my readers, whatever form it takes. Thank you and everyone else for commenting. I'm sure Dave appreciates it. Peace. Cynus
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Post by Peter Pan on Oct 1, 2016 4:38:53 GMT -5
I am also one, who likes the stories, reads them and then forgets to thank the author and provide feedback. I think I read all Sanitaria Springs Stories and found the format very interesting. The cooperation of several authors on the same setting and group of people is very innovative and allows to see the characters from different perspectives.
I liked to read Charmed, and its predecessor Love and Loss as well. Dylan's and Crispin's characters, their insecurities and dilemmas come out well, and one starts to put oneself in their situation. I also like that they are pretty "normal" but still distinct personalities. Nate seems to be a bit in the background but is a very likable person as well. It was nice that Dylan and Crispin found together so quickly, but I am afraid some troubles loom in the next chapter. And, will Nate's story develop any further?
Many thanks for the exciting story!
Peter Pan
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Post by Dabeagle on Oct 1, 2016 9:03:13 GMT -5
Thank you, Peter! Crispin and Dylan have one more chapter to their story arc and I'm sure we'll have to check in on Nate again—he is sweeter than he's generally given credit for. Thank you for taking the time to write in!
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Post by Buddy on Oct 1, 2016 17:06:54 GMT -5
I'm a big fan of the SS saga. I like that the stories are upbeat and romantic.
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Post by Dabeagle on Oct 1, 2016 19:05:51 GMT -5
I'm a big fan of the SS saga. I like that the stories are upbeat and romantic. Thanks, Buddy! Hope is the backdrop for every story and I can't resist a little romance!
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Post by PaulR5 on Oct 2, 2016 22:59:35 GMT -5
Thank you, Peter! Crispin and Dylan have one more chapter to their story arc and I'm sure we'll have to check in on Nate again—he is sweeter than he's generally given credit for. Thank you for taking the time to write in! Speaking of Nate, I hope that Nate's mother and Dale Kennedy and Mrs. Kennedy have taken legal steps (or quickly will in a new story featuring Nate, Devin, Lucien, Robin, and Judge Kirkwood) to become the legal guardians of Nathan. Crispin and Dylan might possibly appear in that story, also. I have read and re-read "Charmed" about four times now. I keep finding neat passages which have more meaning to me than the first time I read them.
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Post by Dabeagle on Oct 3, 2016 8:47:07 GMT -5
As I tried to rest this morning, after not sleeping well last night, a potential story came to me.
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Post by Lugnutz on Oct 3, 2016 12:20:01 GMT -5
As I tried to rest this morning, after not sleeping well last night, a potential story came to me. That's a crap shoot when that happens. I usually get something I can use.
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Post by baddius on Oct 6, 2016 16:55:27 GMT -5
Does anyone else find it worrying that Dylan is starting to realize he is in a fictional story? Hes figuring out that there is a pattern to a gay boy coming out and another coming out to snatch him up and then they pair up forever! Hes figuring it out! What if he tells the rest of the characters!?! Believe me when I say fictional characters are NOT happy to find out they're not real.
Just being overly-dramatic up there, but, in all seriousness, great stories. They are inspirational and awesome and pretty much make my Sundays light up when they are posted.
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Post by Dabeagle on Oct 6, 2016 18:13:50 GMT -5
Does anyone else find it worrying that Dylan is starting to realize he is in a fictional story? Hes figuring out that there is a pattern to a gay boy coming out and another coming out to snatch him up and then they pair up forever! Hes figuring it out! What if he tells the rest of the characters!?! Believe me when I say fictional characters are NOT happy to find out they're not real. Just being overly-dramatic up there, but, in all seriousness, great stories. They are inspirational and awesome and pretty much make my Sundays light up when they are posted. LOL I guess I was poking a little fun at the way SS goes sometimes. I know when I meet a character I like, I instantly start wondering what kind of boy to match them up with.
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