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Post by Chris on Feb 18, 2018 19:47:13 GMT -5
Another truly amazing story, so enjoy meeting the various characters of Sanitaria Springs. Looking forward to more stories in this great series.
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Post by Dabeagle on Feb 18, 2018 22:34:18 GMT -5
Thank you, Chris! So glad you enjoyed it!
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Post by paul on Feb 18, 2018 23:15:02 GMT -5
Very sweet story about a couple of sweet guys (with sweet friends). The scene with Brett's take-down by the “butch boy toy” was a riot.
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Post by Dabeagle on Feb 19, 2018 0:06:12 GMT -5
Very sweet story about a couple of sweet guys (with sweet friends). The scene with Brett's take-down by the “butch boy toy” was a riot. I have to admit, I amused myself with that. |
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Post by PaulR5 on Feb 19, 2018 2:02:57 GMT -5
Excellent story. I like the fact that this mirrored so much of real life relationships where the attraction builds gradually, and people often get to know someone in other ways than WHAM! Instant chemistry.
This has the potential to springboard and dovetail with other relationships. I can see Nate and Elliot lasting even better because of the gradual building of the relationship. The friends they have pulling for them aids as well.
Loved Nate's comment about Brett's chicken neck!
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Post by Dabeagle on Feb 19, 2018 12:51:24 GMT -5
Excellent story. I like the fact that this mirrored so much of real life relationships where the attraction builds gradually, and people often get to know someone in other ways than WHAM! Instant chemistry. This has the potential to springboard and dovetail with other relationships. I can see Nate and Elliot lasting even better because of the gradual building of the relationship. The friends they have pulling for them aids as well. Loved Nate's comment about Brett's chicken neck! Thank you, Paul! I like how the two of them have gone through some break ups, some opportunities to see what they like and don't in a relationship as well as what they need. I agree, I think they'll last. Thanks for reading! |
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Post by greys on Feb 19, 2018 14:01:36 GMT -5
Another Great Story. Also loved the part where the "Butch Boy Toy" Simply Stated, "I am Saving You From Him!". It was nice to read the Plot that lead up to the ending / beginning at the end of this story. I remember from some other stories that Dev & Griffin had kinda been pushing Elliot to spend more time with Nate as He, Dev was going away for College and wanted someone to spend some time with Nate and not think of him as nothing more than a Sex Machine.
Again, also looking forward to the Future Stories that this will bring and how the Characters will be developed.
Thanks for all of the Hard Work in Writing & Hosting This Site, I Do Not Say it Epoug, but It is Greatly Appreciated.
Greys
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Post by simonuk on Feb 19, 2018 17:33:44 GMT -5
Wow ! This was amazing, I've read it twice already and it's quickly establishing itself as one of my absolute favourite SS stories so thank you so much. It's incredible how much Nate has grown and matured over the last couple of years, and Eliot has always been a great , if slightly overlooked, character. I'm with Dev and Griff and Dylan and Crispin - they really do seem to go together really well, the new SS power couple maybe (with Der and Austin) we are in need of more couples after we see Robin, Lu, Griff and Dev leave for college.
You seem to have opened up a lot of potential avenues to explore within the last four stories which is encouraging as I'd kinda resigned myself to the series fizzling out somewhat.
Thanks again Dave
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Post by Dabeagle on Feb 19, 2018 22:03:12 GMT -5
Thanks greys and Simon, I'm very pleased you enjoyed the story arc. I'm happy with where these guys ended up and, yes, they could be an influence for another year or so, perhaps. While I don't have a great deal in the hopper for SS, I did get word that there may be two other people who may try to contribute - and new blood is a good thing.
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Post by simonuk on Feb 20, 2018 18:56:42 GMT -5
Thanks greys and Simon, I'm very pleased you enjoyed the story arc. I'm happy with where these guys ended up and, yes, they could be an influence for another year or so, perhaps. While I don't have a great deal in the hopper for SS, I did get word that there may be two other people who may try to contribute - and new blood is a good thing. Couldn't agree more about new blood getting involved, really excited at potential new additions and / or continuations of current characters. It would be really cool if it comes to pass. |
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Post by Steve T. on Feb 21, 2018 13:56:36 GMT -5
I'm such a sucker for a happy ending! Well done, Elliott and Nate! Honestly, I WANT things to work out well for the characters. There's enough crappy things going on in the real world that good things happening in the world of the Springs makes the crappy stuff seem not quite so bad. Thanks, Dave!
Steve T.
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Post by annon on Feb 25, 2018 2:07:29 GMT -5
Great story
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Post by Sy on Mar 2, 2018 1:33:16 GMT -5
"...a unicorn... nice and polite, handsome..." Encapsulates this sweet story. I really like the pairing of a stereotypical opposites: a musician (think nerdy geek) and athlete (think dumb jock). It's easy (for me) to forget that athletic prowess are the product of concentrated dedication to practice. If they can focus a similar commitment to their relationship, you will have a unicorn couple on your hands  ! |
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Post by Dabeagle on Mar 2, 2018 13:01:39 GMT -5
"...a unicorn... nice and polite, handsome..." Encapsulates this sweet story. I really like the pairing of a stereotypical opposites: a musician (think nerdy geek) and athlete (think dumb jock). It's easy (for me) to forget that athletic prowess are the product of concentrated dedication to practice. If they can focus a similar commitment to their relationship, you will have a unicorn couple on your hands ! That's a neat way to look at it. I think they are both driven by what they enjoy, though I think Nate is more of a natural athlete than someone incredibly focused. However, baseball makes sense to him so there is room for what you're thinking. I enjoy hearing what readers think might be the motivations for characters - they are a great couple, though. I'm pleased they ended up together. |
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Post by RK on Mar 4, 2018 23:42:53 GMT -5
Good tale, well told.
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