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Post by Neal on Dec 13, 2023 3:42:07 GMT -5
What an interesting SS story!
I really like "First Person" narrative stories and, I really liked this story because it told a nice story of teen angst mixed with hints of social commentary and had a happy ending.
Favorite sentence: ""Yeah. Getting your dick sucked can give you some amnesia,” Garrett said and then sighed."
Tim, later in the story made my favorite understatement. "“I mean...it's an effective tool,” I said absently."
There is a glimmer of hope for Garret and Tim's parents. I liked Tim's interactions with his parents. Yeah, Tim. Tim is evolving into a good person. Garrett was also interesting in this story. Sterling's mom is probably my favorite mom in the SS universe. I would be very happy to read more stories about these characters.
Thanks, and keep up the good work Dave.
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Post by James Merkin on Dec 15, 2023 9:59:18 GMT -5
Somewhere I have a password for this forum but damned if I can find it. The Sanitaria Springs universe never fails to inspire. Tim’s a treat and his caring older brother is a prize beyond value. Like Neal I’d be very happy to see more of these characters.
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Post by bobby on Dec 15, 2023 15:54:09 GMT -5
if you are using Google Chome you can go to the setting and it will let you see your saved passwords
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Post by DavidAMorse1701 on Dec 15, 2023 22:04:14 GMT -5
I loved the story, it's a new angle for an episode to take, although I have seen real life brothers both come out. I think the drama has many issues to explore if Tim does determine he's gay as well. It would be great to watch their parents really have to struggle with Timothy coming out. They've never loved Garret so even if he'd been straight nothing would be affected within his family. But Timothy was always their golden child and to have him also turn out to be an abomination and unnatural in their eyes would be great to watch develop. I hope sincerely that you are planning or will consider making this the direction future episodes will go.
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