Post by Neal on Oct 23, 2023 1:05:05 GMT -5
Thanks for another great story. I don't want to give anything away, so I'll just say Marshall's introspection and Isaac quirkiness made for a great story.
I liked it very much. I like Marshall and I love Isaac.
Favorite sentences: "That was how I ended up in my first fight in high school." “Holy shit, how many fucking socks do you keep under your bed?” I love how you put these understated little gems in your stories.
The made me learn (Google) something bit. "The OG Voldemort", "OG, short for “original gangster”." I'm not exposed to current vernacular so, some of your words make me scratch my head. I count it towards my learn something new everyday rule.
That you continue to comment on/include other SS characters is greatly appreciated. The Bell comment is interesting. I hope there will be more about him and Phil in future stories.
Bottom line: The story left me happy and hopeful for a Happily Ever After for Isaac and Marshall.
I liked it very much. I like Marshall and I love Isaac.
Favorite sentences: "That was how I ended up in my first fight in high school." “Holy shit, how many fucking socks do you keep under your bed?” I love how you put these understated little gems in your stories.
The made me learn (Google) something bit. "The OG Voldemort", "OG, short for “original gangster”." I'm not exposed to current vernacular so, some of your words make me scratch my head. I count it towards my learn something new everyday rule.
That you continue to comment on/include other SS characters is greatly appreciated. The Bell comment is interesting. I hope there will be more about him and Phil in future stories.
Bottom line: The story left me happy and hopeful for a Happily Ever After for Isaac and Marshall.