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Post by Dabeagle on Apr 11, 2015 22:27:48 GMT -5
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Post by PaulR5 on Apr 12, 2015 0:11:27 GMT -5
Both good stories. In Robin & Lucian 4 Ever, I like how you point out that SOMETIMES sex can hurt even if you've done it many times before, but that in itself is not a reason to stop, because, (almost always), it does get better (to steal a line from a well-known saying)!
With Across the Pool, I was confused part of the time, then the light dawned. I thought, Wow! Why didn't I think of that?
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Post by ryanbartlett on Apr 12, 2015 11:42:47 GMT -5
I had the opportunity to read Across the Pool a while back and I think Sam hit a home run with this one. It's very original and subtle, the end came as a surprise to me the first time but when you reread it you can see the clues were all there you just had to find them.
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