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Post by PaulR5 on Aug 30, 2015 21:55:12 GMT -5
Wow oh wow, Dabeagle, good story all the way round. I also appreciated applying the Phil/Philip principle to Nate's sperm donor/Frank, but somewhat in reverse.
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Post by JohnInOhio on Aug 30, 2015 23:54:26 GMT -5
Excellent story, Mr. D. This one was full of teenage angst, and some incredible scenes.
Frank:
Talk about clueless! He shot the Nathan's mother and is pissed because the kid is taking his mothers part.
It's a good bit of dialogue, however, and expresses the way that some people feel about women.
Keep up the good work, Dave. I'm happy that the site is really going again. There are way too few places to find good fiction online.
John
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