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Fearless
Jul 10, 2016 7:09:31 GMT -5
via mobile
Post by Israfil on Jul 10, 2016 7:09:31 GMT -5
So far so interesting. I like the new take on the coming out storyline. Usually we have a protagonist trying to come to terms with himself and then gather the courage to come out or approach a boy, etc. In contrast, when we meet Clint, he knows who he is (as much as any 15 year old can at least) and is getting ready to take the next step - or rather beyond it. He's not conflicted about coming out - just about how to do it. And there's no crush to motivate him (yet) which is also a genre favorite. I'm looking forward to the rest
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Post by Lugnutz on Jul 10, 2016 7:48:44 GMT -5
Clint also doesn't take crap from bullies.
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Post by PaulR5 on Jul 27, 2016 9:48:36 GMT -5
The story keeps getting better and better. There may be more positive about Brent than meets the eye--- maybe. Cynus, how did you come up with the name Donovan Sharp?
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Post by Cynus on Jul 27, 2016 15:11:10 GMT -5
Sharp was just an arbitrary last name. Donovan is my middle name, and it was within reach when I needed one.
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Post by TeddyBower on Jul 30, 2016 18:31:01 GMT -5
Sharp was just an arbitrary last name. Donovan is my middle name, and it was within reach when I needed one. I rather like the name Donovan Sharp. Sort of rolls off the tongue. Like someone who just might be worth knowing.
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Post by Dabeagle on Aug 5, 2016 11:21:18 GMT -5
I'm sure this story doesn't come as any surprise, it's recognizable as Cynus's creation from the well drawn characters to the quirky details—like Clint's aversion to clothing. It's little things, such as that, that transform characters into the third dimension.
Of course, I have the advantage of reading in advance—it's compensation for all the coding :-)
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Post by PaulR5 on Aug 5, 2016 22:25:43 GMT -5
Well, Dave, both of us have read the whole story, though for different reasons. (Thanks, Samuel!) All I will say is-- If you think the story has been good so far-- IT GETS BETTER!!!
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Post by Lugnutz on Aug 6, 2016 7:56:37 GMT -5
No spoilers. I'm taking it as it comes.
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Post by JohnInOhio on Aug 14, 2016 11:23:18 GMT -5
I admit I was slow to get started with this story, but I'm liking it more and more. Clint seems to be a bit impulsive, but he's a teenager. He's also compassionate, which is a good quality for anyone. I'm looking forward to future episodes to see where this goes. John
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Post by Dabeagle on Aug 14, 2016 11:42:10 GMT -5
You won't be disappointed!
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Post by PaulR5 on Aug 14, 2016 14:16:25 GMT -5
No, you will not be disappointed. Cynus, this story has sequel possibility.
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Post by Dabeagle on Aug 14, 2016 15:21:40 GMT -5
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