Site Update 10/04/2016

Looks like I am the first to weigh in with an opinion. I liked it. I'll reread it again before the next chapter. I like the first person narrative story format. I liked the little hiccup in the forming relationship. Good one , Cynus, please keep up the great work.

I saw an all wheel drive Vanagon at an intersection today in Phoenix. It was a camper/pop top version, spotless, rust free, cherry looking. I was first at the light in my lane. He was crossing from my right and waiting to turn to his left. Tried to snap a phone pic at last minute, but all I got was a FEDEX truck that crossed through the intersection. Blonde thirty something man driving with small blonde child head visible in shot gun. No teenage boys, too bad I was day dreaming so long or I would have got a better pic.

Thanks for the story Cynus

Neal